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       Before long, I was pinned underneath Jinxx as he kissed every bit of exposed skin, from my neck, lower jaw, and all over my face. With one hand, he held my arms above my head. With the other, he struggled with the buttons of his shirt. I writhed under him, trying to get free, but he was having none of that. He tightened his grasp on my wrists and continued to struggle with his clothes. Frustrated, he yanked at the fabric, there was several popping noises as the silver buttons were torn from their stitches. I gazed at his smooth, pale chest. I could feel his erection pressing against mine through the fabric of my jeans, I thrust my hips upwards trying to knock him of balance, he clucked his tongue and shook his head.

       "No, no, no. That simply will not do." His eyes filled with a devilish light.

       My punishment for acting out, Jinxx slipped his hands under the hem of my shirt and glided his cool hands over my stomach and up to my chest, where he used his thumb to trace circle around my nipples, hardening them instantly.

       "Y-you're such a t-tease!" I managed to gasp.

       "Oh?" He righted himself and looked down at me with an arched eyebrow. He thrust he face towards mine so his lips brushed against my ear. "So I am." His warm breath sent shivers up my spine. In one swift motion, he tilted his head and nipped my neck, surely leaving a love-bite that would mark me as his.

       Jinxx slipped his hand under my shirt again, this time, with the intent to remove it. He tugged it over my head, and released his grasp on my wrist momentarily so he could fling my shirt away. I didn't try to escape, I had already tasted what he would give me, and I wanted more. He hadn't even touched me in a certain area, and I already felt ready to explode!

       Both of us now shirtless, Jinxx pressed himself down so we were chest-to-chest. The warmth of his body against mine was enough to drive me wild. He ravished my body with kisses, used his tongue to write his name on my chest, then trail a line of fire to the waistband of jeans. He released my hands and began to work on undoing my jeans. I propped myself up on my elbows and looked at him. I knew I was hard, he knew I was hard. But I couldn't help but feel embarrassed. To fantasize about something was a totally different thing than it actually happening. So when he tugged them down, allowing my erection to spring free, I looked away and bit my lip to keep myself from crying out.

       "Oh my!" Jinxx's rich voice gasped. "Well, well, well, someone has got quite the package." He wrapped his hands around it and gave it a squeeze.

       My elbows went weak, I collapsed on the floor breathing hard. I closed my eyes, pleasure was constantly traveling through my body, normally I wasn't the one being dominated. Normally, it was girls who were begging for me to fuck them, my competitive side began to surface. I wouldn't stand for this. I clenched my fist and pushed myself into a sitting position. Jinxx stopped his teasing and looked at me, confused. I growled and tackled him to the ground, but he was quick to react and grabbed the sides of my arms and pulled us both into a kneeling position. Jinxx looked me in the eye, I looked back defiantly. With shaking fingers, I undid his jeans. I was breathing hard now, gasping for breath as I hooked my fingers through the waistband of his jeans, I tugged them down, stopping just before anything would show. What do I do now? It's been so long, how do I do this! I was panicking now, Jinxx tipped my chin up with his forefinger and met my gaze.

       "Ash, you don't have to prove anything to me." His voice was so calm, I felt myself relax and continued to work on his jeans.

       I noticed how his hips formed a perfect V, there was a tuft of dark pubic hair peaking out from under his boxers, I took a deep breath and pulled them down all the way, they fell around his knees.

       "Ash." Jinxx's voice interrupted my thoughts about how big it was.

       "What?"

       "Are you sure? I don't want to do something you'll regret later."

       I closed my eyes and took a moment to think about it. Jinxx is still married, but obviously, his relationship with Sammi means nothing to him, and Sammi, well, she's no longer capable of love. Besides, if I do this now, I might regret it later. But if I don't, I'll regret it forever. I opened my eyes, filled with a new found strength. I nodded.

       "Okay, okay Ash." He stood up, tugging me along, and kicked off the remainder of his clothes. He led us up the stairs and into my room, closing the door behind us. Jinxx gently pushed me onto the bed and folded his body over mine. He took my bottom lip between his teeth and nibbled on it. This was completely new to me, and I was surprised to find it extremely pleasurable. When his tongue ran over my lips, asking for entrance, I obliged and allowed him in. Our tongues met in a wild dance, probing and exploring, his tongue passed over the roof of my mouth and I inhaled sharply at the sudden pleasure. Jinxx pulled away and gazed longingly at me. I placed his hands on either side of my head and using his knee, spread my legs apart. The tip of his member pressed against my entrance, he pushed himself completely inside me. I grabbed a fistful of the red blanket at the sudden pain, my body tensed up. Jinxx let himself fall on top of me, he held my body against his as he pulled out and slid back in. I held him back, digging my nails into his back. Again, he slid out, this time, he quickly slipped back in. I threw my head back and shouted.

       "Gahhh!" My chest was heaving, and already sweat was glistening on Jinxx's chest.

       "Does it hurt?" Jinxx gasped. I nodded. "Do you want me to stop?"

       "N-no. I'm fine." Jinxx nodded and pulled out again, this time ramming himself into me.

       "UGHHH!"

       "I'm sorry!" I tossed my head side-to-side.

       "I said I'm fine! Keep going!" Jinxx hesitated, but did what I asked.

       Soon pain was replaced with pleasure, Jinxx was slamming himself into me, I was clawing at his back, leaving bright red lines, and we had both screamed ourselves hoarse. Now, hours later, Jinxx's black hair clung to his moist skin, his face was flushed, and I could tell we were reaching our peaking point. I had held it in for hours, and I was read to cum, but at that exact moment, Jinxx hit a particularly sensitive spot.

       "OH GOD, JINXX, AGAIN!" He pulled out and slammed back into me, hitting that same spot, I didn't think I'd had any energy left, but whenever he hit that spot, it felt so good. I wasn't ready to stop. "MORE, MORE, MORE!"

       Jinxx was pumping furiously now, my erection slapped against both our chests, and the sounds of hot and heavy sex, filled the air once more. I arched my back and gripped Jinxx's biceps, wrapped my legs around his head to bring him closer, as if I could meld ourselves together. The flats of my feet began to burn, I knew I was close.

       "Jinxx! I'm coming! JINXX, OH GOD, JINXX, I'M GOING TO COME!" I squeezed my eyes shut, I could see red and yellow spots dotting my vision, as well as a black haze began to creep around the edges of the room.

       "Wait for me Ashley! Wait!" Suddenly, he let out a guttural shout. "ASHLEY!" His head flew back and I felt him filling me with his seed at the same time blood roared in my ears and my vision went momentarily, I squirted hotly all over his chest, my stomach, and sheets.

       We stayed locked together, my whole body tingled with the remains of the powerful orgasm I had just experienced. Both of us were breathing hard and covered in sweat. Without warning, Jinxx laid himself on top of me, he laced our fingers together and kissed my lower jaw.

       "Ashley," he whispered.

       "Yeah?" I replied.

       "Ready for round two?"

        Automatically I felt my dick give a twitch. "Oh yeah, my body is ready, on one condition though."

        "What would that be?"

        "This time, you're on bottom."
Sorry it's late, I was writing it, but I forgot to save and accidentally clicked away from the page and all of it was erased and I had to start over D:
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XxMaria-MxX Nov 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:la: Explosion 
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XxMaria-MxX Nov 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
buh-bye ovaries :shakeovaries: 
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Who needs them anyway? XD 
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XxMaria-MxX Nov 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Certainly not I
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Same here! XD
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MornaStar Oct 27, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
It's alright, it turned out great!!! Very good on the description! I love how you took a whole chapter for it and didn't hesitate to get to the knitty gritty. I especially loved the part where you said the flats of his feet got hot. I'm not too sure how true that is for guys, but if you are anything like me you have no qualms on asking a guy about their sexual experiences. 
A few things you should check on. Saying that Ashley's penis was slapping both of their chests, I could understand Jinxx's chest because of the angle that he had to be at to enter Ashley, but it wouldn't hit Ashley's chest because there is no way he is that long. Another thing, when you said Ashley wrapped his legs around Jinxx's neck, again because of the previous description I wouldn't think that, that is fee sable. I would say he put his arms around his neck and pulled him down, other wise Jinxx is going to be bent in half and doin' Ash up the ass while giving him head. One last thing. Watch on how girly you make them. Remember to keep Ash and Jinxx in character. They are both dom in my eyes and obviously you are trying to show that in this chapter by how Ashley wasn't happy that Jinxx had all the control then reiterated this at the end when Ashley said Jinxx had to be bottom. Make sure that their speech doesn't sound girly. 
One more pick me up before I leave you with these critiques. I love how you made Jinxx rough. Most guys are rough and I like how you didn't make him easy with Ashley. This in no way took away from Jinxx's masculinity which is something that many writers take away from the characters because they think that because they are nice with women, they will be nice with men, but this is quite the opposite. Very good job. I applaud you on this one!!! 
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XxMaria-MxX Nov 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you for the feedback, I always enjoy ways to improve my writing, I've noticed that I DO make them sound girly, gah! I need to work on that!
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MornaStar Nov 4, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I'll let you know if you fixed it in the next chapter. I can't read it tonight. I'm a little busy, but I'll read it this week. 
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